VISUAL PROMPT
by Louisa Wilhelm @artstation.com/louisawilhelm
Inspired by this image, begin your story, poem, or descriptive paragraph with the line "As the hazy light filtered through the trees"...
sᴇᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ɴᴇxᴛ ʏᴇᴀʀ ᴅᴀᴅ
We were in the forest that had a long river that leads to many other villages it was a beautiful place but to me, it's a painful place to be in
Father was leaving to his master again I waved bye to him as always as tears were coming out I watched him leave it was painful as ever
“Nami he’ll be back” my auntie had told me I didn't say anything but she can tell how I felt
My eyes had welled up with tears I tried not to cry but I did “i-i...know!” I told her as I continue to cry tears they were running down my face fast as always
She rubbed my back “come on Nami let's go home” she told me I slowly nodded we then walked home leaving the painful forest
As I felt I finally had him return he leaves me again but I know he has to return to his master but...I’m just glad he comes home safe
This is a good start that has pieces of emotion and a unique take of the prompt.
Just some feedback on the writing, you need to punctuate and paragraph your sentences. As a reader, it is hard to read which means it takes the reader a lot more effort to understand what is going on.
You could expand on the story by describing the moment the father leaves and what that looks like visually for the daughter.
