WRITING OBSTACLE
In a short scene, how can your protagonist say “I won’t forget you” without literally saying the words “I won’t forget you”?
Chapter 1
Vow
As he took his last breaths, she stared up at the inky black sky, speckled with as many stars as the dreams that she had lost. His attacker was behind her, readying a machete to respond to any attack that she may make.
She reached out, and closed his eyes.
Then, she picked up her gun. She wasn’t the type to forgive,and she definitely wasn’t going to forget.
She loaded her gun, and fired her very first bullet.
The world would burn.