STORY STARTER
Submitted by b Quill To Page
Write a short story including a character who is ‘the rough in the diamonds’ instead of ‘the diamond in the rough.’
The Rough in the Diamonds
Agatha Fletcher stepped off the creaking carriage into the wan glimmer of the showman’s marquee. A fine drizzle misted the gas lamps along Lichfield Lane, turning the cobbled street into a slick ribbon of night. Inside, a cluster of jewel merchants huddled over velvet trays, their murmurs as hushed as nervous birds. Agatha, clutching her battered leather satchel, felt every pair of eyes turn to her—an anxious murmur running through the crowd like a shuttered door.
She was, by all accounts, the rough in the diamonds. Despite her unkempt hair and threadbare coat, she carried the gleam of promise in her steady, green eyes. Each tray of glittering stones on display showcased perfection: flawless sapphires, prisms of emerald, and diamonds that caught the lamplight like captured stars. Yet not one trader among them recognised the singular gem Agatha had brought.
“Good evening,” she ventured, her voice soft but resolute. “Might you care to inspect something unique?” Mr Carroway, proprietor of Carroway & Sons, peered at her through wire-frame spectacles. He’d spent twenty years polishing the city’s most renowned gemstones. At first he saw only her ragged hems. Then he spotted the small velvet pouch she withdrew, the edges frayed, the seam worn.
Agatha opened the pouch and lifted, delicately, a diamond so pale it seemed to hold its own winter moon. Imperfections flecked its surface—tiny clouded spots and microscopic striations that no craftsperson would dare exhibit. Yet as it caught the light, the diamond fractured its inner glow into more hues than Agatha had ever seen in glass. She held it between thumb and forefinger and offered it to Carroway.
He hesitated. Prescribed wisdom insisted on flawless gems. He glanced at the perfect stones laid out before him. Yet something in his learned eye softened at this murk-streaked beauty. It spoke of story and hardship, of potential locked within. “It’s… unusual,” he said, his voice hushed as though in confession.
“Unusual, yes,” Agatha replied. “They call me the rough in the diamonds—because I find value where others see only faults.” She told him of the moors beyond Carlisle where she’d uncovered the stone, half-buried beneath peat and bog. She spoke of days spent with her father, learning to detect every hidden fracture behind a gem’s façade.
Carroway leaned back, studying the diamond as though it might reveal the future. Suddenly, he smiled. “This belongs to a new collection—one that tells a story rather than hides its scars. I will take it.”
A swell of triumph rose in Agatha’s chest, but she kept her features calm. The years of ridicule had taught her restraint. He offered her a ledger and a quill, and she signed her name—Agatha Fletcher; no longer just the rough in the diamonds, but a name that would soon be etched in stone.
That night, Agatha walked home under skies nearly clear of rain. In the pale glow of the streetlamp, she glanced at her reflection in a shop window. Her coat might still be threadbare, but her eyes held a new, steady light—one born of the knowledge that beauty could be found in the unlikeliest of places.
And in the heart of that London’s grandest jewellers, Agatha Fletcher’s flawed diamond would shine brighter than any polished gem, proof that even the roughest stones can become legends.