POEM STARTER

Submitted by HardCoreWriter

Write a poem comparing a house and a home.

Dorothy’s House

First they had to set it upright.

A system of pulleys and levers and rope

It took a day or two (what’s a day in Oz? 24 hours like ours?)

They drew straws to scrape off the witch corpse.


No one had ever owned a house like this.

They saw the photos -

Loved ones, they assumed.

So they hung their own on the walls.


Dishes and crockery lay scattered.

Meals, they realized. People who love each other

Eat together, too.


Artwork - so they made paintings.

Washing tubs.

Furniture.

Blankets and beds.


They chose a mother and father and child

To move in.

A garden was planted.

The children grew and soon there were more.

Holidays celebrated.

In time, there were deaths, of old age.


Love, beauty, sorrow, laughter.

That’s what made a home more than a house.

They built more. They loved more.


With a home, they realized, life had meaning.

The house that blew in that fateful day

Was just wood and nails.

Over time it became a living thing.

It breathed life to all who knew it.

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