WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Samantha Roberts
Write a descriptive scene about a character feeling the sunlight on their face for the first time in a very long while.
Try to use as many senses as you can to capture this moment.
A Taste Of Gold
Elara’s hand trembled as she pushed open the heavy oak door. It groaned on ancient hinges, a sound she hadn’t heard in years, swallowed by the muffled silence of her sickroom. A sliver of blinding white light sliced into the gloom, making her wince, her eyes still accustomed to the perpetual twilight of drawn curtains. Each breath felt impossibly shallow.
Then, she stepped out.
The world hit her in a dizzying cascade of senses. First, the light. It wasn't just bright; it was a living, breathing entity. Her eyes squeezed shut, tears welling instantly, not from pain, but from the sheer, overwhelming presence of it. It pulsed against her eyelids, painting the inside of her vision in fiery oranges and yellows. Slowly, tentatively, she cracked them open.
The sky was a violent, impossible blue. Not the faded, washed-out blue she'd seen in old photographs, but a deep, vibrant expanse that stretched forever. And then, the sun. It wasn't just a point in the sky; it was a caress, a warmth spreading across her face with an almost liquid sensation. It seeped into her skin, melting away the lingering chill of her confinement, a delicate heat that made every nerve ending hum. It felt like soft velvet, then a thousand tiny, benevolent needles dancing across her cheeks, a prickle of thawing.
A soft breeze, carrying the clean, damp scent of rich earth and something vaguely floral – honeysuckle, maybe? – brushed past her, whispering promises. She inhaled deeply, the air tasting crisp and clean, almost sweet on her tongue, metallic with a hint of rain that must have fallen days ago. The quiet of her room was replaced by a symphony: the distant, lazy hum of a bee, the rustle of unseen leaves, the far-off chirrup of a robin. Each sound felt sharp, distinct, a detail she’d forgotten existed.
She lifted a trembling hand, feeling the sun's gentle pressure on her palm, a warmth that felt like a blessing. For years, her world had been muted, a dull watercolor. Now, it was a breathtaking oil painting, vibrant and alive, bursting with color and warmth. A single tear escaped, tracing a path through the golden warmth on her cheek. It wasn't just light; it was life, returning to her, breath by agonizing breath. And for the first time in what felt like a lifetime, Elara felt truly, utterly present.