WRITING OBSTACLE

Tell the reader everything they need to know about a character by only describing their shoes.

Doc Marten’s & Air Forces

Noor’s Doc Marten’s were always clean. They shined in the light. They were pretty used up — you could tell by the scuffs on them. They have been through some times but even then, they were always at their best. They were her favourite shoes.


Ayan’s Nike Air Forces on the other hand were the opposite. They had scuffs and other unidentifiable marks on them. Underneath the marks, there were signatures. His and his friends signatures were scribbled on. They were his favourite shoes.


(Characters based off of my WIP)

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