WRITING OBSTACLE
Submitted by lanie
Write a story, poem, or paragraph, personifying a creaky floorboard in an old house.
Remember this doesn't mean you have to write from its perspective, but give it human characteristics.
The Whispering Timber
In the silent corridor of the old Rookwood House, where shadows danced along dust-laden walls, lay a creaky floorboard that had long ceased to be merely planks underfoot. Affectionately known by the residents as “Old Joseph,” this board possessed a personality as rich and layered as the memories it harboured. Each footstep upon it was not just a mere tread—it was a conversation with time, an echo of past laughter and sorrow.
Old Joseph spoke in the language of creaks and sighs, communicating in a dialect all his own. When a hurried stride passed over him, he would groan sharply as if chiding the speed; when a gentle, measured step made its way across his worn surface, he responded with a soft, knowing murmur, as though greeting an old friend. In the quiet moments, he almost seemed to chuckle—a warm, raspy sound reminiscent of a secret shared over a cosy fire on a stormy evening.
On particularly blustery nights, when the wind rattled the ancient windowpanes and rain drummed on the leaded glass, Old Joseph became the quiet confessor of Rookwood House. His tired creaks weaved together the fragments of countless private conversations and heartfelt confessions once uttered by the inhabitants. Those who sat in the flickering lamplight would sometimes pause to listen, as if the old floorboard might reveal lost tales of joy, grief, and enduring hope stitched into its very grain.
Yet beneath his creaking exterior lay a profound yearning—not merely to bear the weight of passing feet, but to be recognised as a keeper of the house’s soul. In every uneven note of his creak, Old Joseph pleaded to be remembered: not simply as wood and wear, but as a silent guardian of memories, a character who had lived through every triumph and trial of those who had walked above him.
In the fading twilight of Rookwood House, where time seemed to linger like dust motes in a shaft of light, Old Joseph remained a steadfast witness. His every sigh and creak were a reminder that even the most unassuming parts of our world can carry a heart, and that within the aged timbers of an old house, history itself could speak with a voice both tender and true.