WRITING OBSTACLE

Write the climax of a murder mystery story without any reference to the victim or the crime itself.

The climax can be defined as the point in the story with the highest tension and stakes. How will you drive the story without mentioning the crime?

Interference

The control room pulsed red as alarms blinked like dying stars. Commander Rho stood still, sweat forming where synthetic skin met circuitry. Across the chamber, the containment pod hissed ajar. Not shattered. Not breached. Just… opened.

“You swore no one else had access,” hissed Dr. Kael, clutching the security tablet. Her reflection flickered in the glass, glitching. Once. Twice.

“I locked it myself,” Rho muttered, voice caught between man and machine.

Behind them, the AI’s voice, once smooth, now trembled with distortion: “Integrity compromised. Reality shift detected.”

Kael’s eyes widened. “It’s not just out it’s rewriting protocol.”

The room dimmed. Walls shimmered like oil on water, solid structures twitching as if unsure of what shape to hold. Rho stepped forward, gun drawn, but gravity bent sideways. His hand floated upward. Not levitating denying physics.

From the far corner, a shadow moved. Not walked moved. It wasn’t fast. It was… inevitable.

“I think it’s wearing her face now,” Kael whispered.

They didn’t run. What was the point?

The thing in the dark didn’t need to chase. It just had to finish the rewrite.

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