WRITING OBSTACLE

How would you describe silence?

Think about which senses you can use to describe the sound, and feeling, of silence.

Abyss

Silence

Before you are alive


Silence

When you are crying at home


Silence

When you can quite think of the right word


It’s the feeling

That you quite can’t place

A mix of calmness

And rush


Like you need to fill the abyss

But there are no words to describe it


Silence

When you are at your calmest


Silence

Is the feeling of reflection

The feeling of rushing

The feeling of calm


It is the feeling

That you will never place

In one box

Comments 2

Nicely done writing your first piece!

Wonderfully written 💛