STORY STARTER

In the semi-darkness, the pebbles looked like coffee beans.

Write a story that starts with this sentence. Think about what kind of character would make this comparison.

sleepy

In the semi-darkness, the pebbles looked like coffee beans.

I’ve been awake for too long


The street lights from the winding road above us send a glow across the water


It glimmers as I rub my eyes.


I need coffee

better yet I need to sleep.


The person I was meeting was supposed to be here an hour ago.


I get up.

They can’t really fault me for leaving at this point can they?


I start walking across the beach, the rocks clicking and clacking under me feet


The waves lapping gently at the shores.


The clouds high above follow me as I stumble.


My lord, I’m tired.

I really need coffee.


My head spins as I need moving forward, pushing towards my car.


My vision is blurring.


Why am I so tired?

It’s fine

I’m fine


Just need some coffee.


I take one step, then another.

My lips are going numb


So I don’t feel it when I hit the ground

Or when someone scoops me into their arms


And I don’t feel it when they load me into the waiting helicopter

Or when we fly away.


All I do know is that i’m finally getting some sleep

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