VISUAL PROMPT

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painted in smoke
The burning fire stood ahead of us.
Heat glazed my face, making me choke out a cough.
I never wanted — or thought — this would happen.
An hour earlier, the smell of smoke hit my nose. I felt it creeping closer and closer.
I ran to my door, desperate to find out what was going on.
It was swollen shut, and no matter how hard I yanked, it wouldn’t open.
I started banging and yelling, trying to force it.
We didn’t even have windows — my parents didn’t think about that 20 years ago when they bought this shabby old home, now burning to the ground.
Flames licked beneath the door.
I screamed for help — anyone.
I screamed so hard, my voice cracked and tore.
My heart slammed in my throat as I beat against the door,
thoughts racing faster than the fire outside.
There was a chair near my desk — my first instinct was to grab it.
A nonverbal command echoed in my head:
Get out. You have to get out.
I slammed the chair into the door.
Nothing.
Again.
And again.
My face glistened with sweat — panic, terror.
Gasps escaped my lips, sharp with fear and frustration.
I couldn’t stop thinking that I might not make it out.
That thought made me slam harder.
My body felt weak, melting. Like a forgotten ice cube —
once solid, now soft and slipping away.
Flames danced beneath the crack of the door.
I was trapped.
Stuck.
The more seconds passed, the worse it got.
With everything in me, I hurled the chair at the door.
White paint chipped off in splinters.
Finally — a crack.
The door burst open.
My heart pounded.
Ahead of me, fire roared, tall and wild.
Black shadows danced across walls and doorframes.
I held the chair like a shield, but the smoke still poured in.
My lungs burned.
My eyes stung.
My vision blurred.
Then —
Screams.
My little sister. Anna.
Her cries are still carved in my memory.
“Anna!!” I shouted, trying to reach her room.
Her door was shut.
I backed up.
Slamming, yelling, coughing.
“MOM!” I screamed, spotting her figure through the smoke — she was running down the stairs, carrying my baby brother.
“But what about Anna?” I yelled after her, coughing hard.
She looked back, her face red with heat, eyes wide with panic.
Then she disappeared down the fire-soaked stairs.
Fear covered me like paint — thick, hot, and heavy.
I turned back to Anna’s door.
“Anna! Move away! I’m coming in!” I shouted.
Coughing, choking.
My lungs felt useless.
I was dizzy.
My body was giving out.
Still, I kept slamming the chair into her door, again and again.
Finally, the door gave way.
I threw the chair aside and rushed in.
She was okay.
Her chestnut curls were untouched. Her hazel eyes were wide and wet with tears.
“Anna, thank goodness,” I whispered, hugging her tight.
I shut the door behind us.
She was shaking, sobbing.
“Okay, Anna, we’re getting out through your window, okay?” I said, brushing her hair back.
“But what about Teddy?”
Her eyes searched mine.
I couldn’t tell her Teddy — her favorite plush — was probably ashes now.
So I lied.
“Mom has him. We need to go now,” I said, coughing again.
My throat burned like it had been scraped raw.
I threw open the window.
We were high up — the ground looked far.
“We have to jump,” I told her.
I climbed out first, looking down.
I swallowed my fear.
And I let go.
The fall felt like forever.
But I landed.
My hip screamed in pain.
My arms ached.
But I was okay.
“Anna! Come on!” I yelled, coughing hard.
She stood there, trembling.
“Anna, I’ll catch you! I promise!”
Still, she didn’t move.
“Anna, please!”
She stepped closer.
“It’s like a game! Like at the pool, remember?” I tried.
She stared down at me.
“I’m scared!” she cried.
“Don’t be. I’m here. I’ll catch you. I swear.
5…
4…
3…”
Her eyes were full of terror. The fire behind her glowed brighter.
“2…
1…”
She jumped.
I reached up, caught her as best I could.
She fell into my arms.
We crashed to the ground.
My hip throbbed. My arms screamed.
But she was okay.
“You did so good, Anna,” I told her, holding her close.
Now we stand together, watching our house crumble to ashes.
The fire truck sirens wail in the distance.
I pick her up, rest her on my side, and stroke her hair.
We’re safe.
But I’ll never forget what we left behind.