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painted in smoke

The burning fire stood ahead of us.

Heat glazed my face, making me choke out a cough.


I never wanted — or thought — this would happen.


An hour earlier, the smell of smoke hit my nose. I felt it creeping closer and closer.

I ran to my door, desperate to find out what was going on.

It was swollen shut, and no matter how hard I yanked, it wouldn’t open.

I started banging and yelling, trying to force it.

We didn’t even have windows — my parents didn’t think about that 20 years ago when they bought this shabby old home, now burning to the ground.


Flames licked beneath the door.

I screamed for help — anyone.

I screamed so hard, my voice cracked and tore.


My heart slammed in my throat as I beat against the door,

thoughts racing faster than the fire outside.


There was a chair near my desk — my first instinct was to grab it.

A nonverbal command echoed in my head:

Get out. You have to get out.


I slammed the chair into the door.

Nothing.

Again.

And again.


My face glistened with sweat — panic, terror.

Gasps escaped my lips, sharp with fear and frustration.

I couldn’t stop thinking that I might not make it out.


That thought made me slam harder.


My body felt weak, melting. Like a forgotten ice cube —

once solid, now soft and slipping away.


Flames danced beneath the crack of the door.

I was trapped.

Stuck.

The more seconds passed, the worse it got.


With everything in me, I hurled the chair at the door.

White paint chipped off in splinters.

Finally — a crack.

The door burst open.


My heart pounded.

Ahead of me, fire roared, tall and wild.


Black shadows danced across walls and doorframes.

I held the chair like a shield, but the smoke still poured in.

My lungs burned.

My eyes stung.

My vision blurred.


Then —

Screams.


My little sister. Anna.

Her cries are still carved in my memory.


“Anna!!” I shouted, trying to reach her room.

Her door was shut.

I backed up.

Slamming, yelling, coughing.


“MOM!” I screamed, spotting her figure through the smoke — she was running down the stairs, carrying my baby brother.


“But what about Anna?” I yelled after her, coughing hard.


She looked back, her face red with heat, eyes wide with panic.

Then she disappeared down the fire-soaked stairs.


Fear covered me like paint — thick, hot, and heavy.


I turned back to Anna’s door.

“Anna! Move away! I’m coming in!” I shouted.


Coughing, choking.

My lungs felt useless.

I was dizzy.

My body was giving out.


Still, I kept slamming the chair into her door, again and again.


Finally, the door gave way.

I threw the chair aside and rushed in.


She was okay.


Her chestnut curls were untouched. Her hazel eyes were wide and wet with tears.

“Anna, thank goodness,” I whispered, hugging her tight.


I shut the door behind us.


She was shaking, sobbing.

“Okay, Anna, we’re getting out through your window, okay?” I said, brushing her hair back.


“But what about Teddy?”

Her eyes searched mine.


I couldn’t tell her Teddy — her favorite plush — was probably ashes now.

So I lied.

“Mom has him. We need to go now,” I said, coughing again.

My throat burned like it had been scraped raw.


I threw open the window.

We were high up — the ground looked far.


“We have to jump,” I told her.


I climbed out first, looking down.

I swallowed my fear.

And I let go.


The fall felt like forever.

But I landed.

My hip screamed in pain.

My arms ached.

But I was okay.


“Anna! Come on!” I yelled, coughing hard.


She stood there, trembling.


“Anna, I’ll catch you! I promise!”


Still, she didn’t move.


“Anna, please!”


She stepped closer.


“It’s like a game! Like at the pool, remember?” I tried.

She stared down at me.


“I’m scared!” she cried.


“Don’t be. I’m here. I’ll catch you. I swear.

5…

4…

3…”


Her eyes were full of terror. The fire behind her glowed brighter.


“2…

1…”


She jumped.


I reached up, caught her as best I could.

She fell into my arms.


We crashed to the ground.

My hip throbbed. My arms screamed.


But she was okay.


“You did so good, Anna,” I told her, holding her close.


Now we stand together, watching our house crumble to ashes.

The fire truck sirens wail in the distance.


I pick her up, rest her on my side, and stroke her hair.

We’re safe.

But I’ll never forget what we left behind.

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