WRITING OBSTACLE

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Last Goodbye

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โ€œAre you really leaving?โ€ I asked, my voice barely above a whisper.

Gabe looked away, his fingers fumbling with the zipper of his jacket. โ€œYeah. Itโ€™sโ€ฆ itโ€™s not my choice.โ€

โ€œBut you can fight it, right?โ€ I stepped closer, searching his face for anything, anything to hold onto.

He chuckled, dry and humorless. โ€œYou know me. Iโ€™m terrible at fighting.โ€

โ€œIโ€™ll fight for you.โ€ My throat burned as the words scraped their way out.

โ€œYou shouldnโ€™t have to.โ€ His voice cracked, and for the first time, Gabe wouldnโ€™t meet my eyes.

โ€œI donโ€™t care.โ€ I grabbed his wrist, desperate. โ€œIโ€™ll do anything. Justโ€ฆ donโ€™t leave like this.โ€

A long pause.

โ€œI have to.โ€

โ€œNo, you donโ€™t!โ€ My voice shot up, trembling. โ€œWe promised, Gabe. Remember? โ€˜An eternity weโ€™ll spend together.โ€™ You made me believe it.โ€

He sighed, the sound sharp and final. โ€œI believed it too.โ€

โ€œThen why?โ€ My chest ached so bad I couldnโ€™t breathe. โ€œWhy are you breaking it?โ€

Gabe pulled his hand free, running it through his hair. โ€œBecause lifeโ€™s cruel. And sometimes it takes the people you love most and scatters them across the world like dust.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m not dust, Gabe.โ€ A tear slid down my cheek before I could stop it.

โ€œI know.โ€ His voice dropped so low I barely heard him.

The clock struck eight. The headlights of a car flashed through the window of the old restaurant.

โ€œI gotta go.โ€

โ€œWait โ€” please โ€” one last hug.โ€

For a moment, I thought he wouldnโ€™t. But then he was in my arms, and everything shattered.

โ€œIโ€™ll miss you, you idiot,โ€ I mumbled into his shoulder.

โ€œIโ€™ll miss you more.โ€ He pulled back, his smile trembling like glass.

And then, just like that โ€” he was gone.

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