STORY STARTER
Submitted by chiyo | チヨ |
'We leaned up against the wall, and I had no idea what was coming next.'
Write this as the opening or closing line to your story, in any genre.
The Stranger
Amanda’s evening had been uneventful until her attention was wholly captured by the glow of her mobile. The deaf girl was completely absorbed in the messages and images streaming across her screen, so much so that she failed to notice the narrow, shadow‐clad alleyway beckoning at the side of the busy street. In one heartbeat, her quiet routine was shattered.
From the darkness of the alley, a man suddenly emerged. Without a moment’s warning, he lunged forward and pressed his lips against hers in a forceful, almost desperate kiss. Shock rippled through Amanda as she instinctively tried to push him away. Before she could muster a protest, he had snatched her wrists and lifted her hands above her head. Confusion warred with fear in her mind as she struggled to understand his strange, intrusive gesture.
It was then, in the midst of that disorienting assault, that Amanda’s eyes caught a glimmer of something unexpected. The man’s face was streaked with fresh blood, his features twisted not in malice but in a palpable, desperate pain. His eyes darted around wildly, betraying a sense of urgency rather than predation. In that unsettled moment, as Amanda’s heart pounded in silent alarm, another movement in the periphery made everything go from surreal to dangerous.
Across the mouth of the alley, several figures were sprinting past, their determined strides accompanied by the unmistakable gleam of guns held in tight hands. The armed run had nothing to do with Amanda—and soon it would be clear that it wasn’t aimed solely at her unexpected companion either. The man’s grip, fierce and deliberate, seemed to communicate a silent plea: this was not an act of wanton assault but a means of compelling her to stay quiet, to witness the unfolding threat before it was too late.
For a split second, the nature of the encounter shifted. Amanda, though still reeling from the shock of his invasive kiss, perceived the subtle signs of his true distress. This man was not the villain she’d assumed; his discoloured, trembling hand and the haunted expression in his eyes spoke of a recent—and violent—conflict. Her innate sense, honed by a life where words were neither heard nor easily missed, began to piece together the dangerous puzzle before her. He was caught in a fight that had left him injured, and now, a gang of armed pursuers was drawing ever nearer.
In the suspended chaos that followed, unspoken understanding passed between them. With no time for explanation or protest, they turned on their heels and darted deeper into the labyrinth of twisting alleys and hidden corners. Every flicker of a streetlamp and every echo of hastened footsteps heightened the tension. With each heartbeat, Amanda realised that survival depended not on immediate escape alone, but on a fragile alliance built in the crucible of unexpected circumstance.
After what felt like an endless pursuit through the maze-like backstreets of a city that suddenly seemed both alien and treacherous, they found temporary refuge behind an imposing brick wall in a deserted courtyard. The armed figures were fast approaching, their presence a dark threat looming just beyond the fragile shelter. Gasping for breath and with adrenaline still surging through her veins, Amanda paused to catch her breath as her unlikely companion gingerly tended to the wound on his arm.
In that heavy, silent pause—a moment where the only sound was the rapid thump of her own heart—she felt the gravity of the night settle upon them like a shroud. It was then, with the stark realisation of her own vulnerability mingled with the shock of the bizarre chain of events, that the full weight of the night’s ordeal struck her.
“We leaned up against the wall, and I had no idea what was coming next.”