WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a dialogue scene that portrays a toxic relationship.

Why Not?

So I was on the couch scrolling through my phone when I came across tickets for a band. Now I couldn’t remember if my boyfriend like this one or another but if he did I wanted to surprise him with the tickets.


I looked up from my phone to see him playing on his.

“Hey Babe? May I see your phone for a sec?”

His head shot up and he glared at me, “Now why do you need to see my phone huh?”

I chuckled, “Why not babe?”

He looked at me with such a hard stare.

“I want to confirm one thing real quick to make sure I have the right information.”

“No flipping way. You’re just seeing if I’m doing something wrong. This is why I’ve never given you the password.”


That was two weeks ago. By now I learned that he was talking to other girls and sleeping with them. Trust is one thing that you can’t get back. I should have seen the signs.

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