STORY STARTER

Chaotic

Write a scene where something chaotic is happening.

Stillness Beneath the Storm

It was a soft afternoon, the kind that made time stretch like warm honey. Maya lay on a faded blue towel in her grandmother’s garden, which sloped gently toward the lake. The sun cradled her skin, warm but not scorching. Her hair spread like a dark halo on the grass, damp with a trace of lake water. Butterflies floated lazily from blossom to blossom. Birds chattered in a low, melodious argument in the tree above her.


Maya exhaled, long and slow. No one needed her right now. No emails, no decisions. Just stillness.


She let her eyes follow a yellow butterfly dancing through a shaft of light. But the peace didn’t last. Not inside her.


It began subtly — a flicker of memory. A conversation with her father two nights ago, where he spoke of how quickly time passes. Then came the pang of something she hadn’t finished. Her unfinished degree. The job she almost took. The one she didn’t. Her mother’s voice crept in, then her ex’s laughter. The faces of people she hadn’t seen in years but still replayed in her mind like unsent letters.


Thoughts quickened. Her breathing shallowed. Her eyes were open, but she wasn’t seeing anymore. She was sprinting through decades of imagined futures, regrets, what-ifs, should-haves. Every flutter of her heart echoed louder in her head. Would she end up alone? Did she already waste her best years? Could she ever truly be happy?


The butterflies were gone. The lake had blurred. Her mind had become a whirlpool. The sun felt like it was burning.


And then — a breath. No, not hers. A gust of wind.


It stirred the leaves. A soft rustle.


She blinked.


A bird landed just a few feet away, head tilted, eyes sharp. The garden shimmered. She noticed how still everything else was — the gentle rhythm of the lake, the sun still warm and steady. The sky a wide blue canvas.


Inside, she had been collapsing. But out here?


Peace.


Maya sat up, her heartbeat still high but slowing. She looked around, as if she had emerged from underwater. The chaos in her mind didn’t vanish — but it softened. It became background noise instead of the whole world.


And for the first time in a long while, she just… noticed. The present, uncomplicated and undemanding.


She smiled, half in awe, half in surrender. And lay back down, letting the grass cradle her, letting the moment — this one perfect, present second — hold her still.

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