WRITING OBSTACLE

Inspired by Amber A

Use the metaphor of a fuse being lit and its impending explosion to represent a mental eruption of a strong emotion.

Consider how you will develop this metaphor with strong visual and emotional representation.

Siren’s Song

Frayed threads beguiled by a siren’s song ignite a crackling flame


I think she wants me dead


I can see the lights coming

I can feel the heat—

The Embers of Industry


I wanted to leave it be,

but the songs around me just wouldn’t end


Seraphic sirens stargazing into my mind


They sing haunted hymns that lure me to utter madness


When the dust clears,

everyone will be gone


A final stop at Badland before the Great Serenity


And as the exploding galaxies say:


On the way down, you’ll hear the gears twist and crank

At the bottom, there is no one else to thank

If the boot fits, walk the plank


Nothing but a sunken, gullible point of a shadow will remain


It demands recognition

and an answer to guilt


Pay no attention—

just a lost song,

toiling without any plans for a nurturing resolution


Temptation and perseverance do the waltz across the starry sky


The boot fit

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