STORY STARTER
“If only this world had shown me a little more mercy…”
Continue the sentence and write a single scene inspired by it.
If only …
**"If only this world had shown me a little more mercy, I might have believed in love without a hint of trepidation…" **
Marianne sat alone on the cold stone bench by the canal, the grey skies echoing her mood. The rain had just ceased its relentless drumming, leaving the streets slick and reflective, much like the shattered pieces of her once-whole heart. In the lingering hush after the storm, she allowed herself to reminisce about the tumult of the past.
There had been a time when love had brightened her days—a relationship so full of promise that Marianne had trusted with every fibre of her being. Yet that trust had been cruelly betrayed. The man she had loved, the one who seemed to embody a tender, unyielding faith in their future, had turned disloyal. His betrayal was not his alone; mean friends and disingenuous acquaintances had conspired with their venomous tongues, whispering lies that eroded what was once a beautiful bond. Cruel people, it seemed, were all too ready to ruin the gentle magic of a budding relationship.
The resulting pain had left her with a broken heart, one that lay in tatters along the roadside of her life. Marianne had, for a long time, found herself losing self—her identity fragmented by doubts and the ghost of trust that now seemed so difficult to return. The betrayal had gnawed at her faith in human kindness and left her questioning whether the notion of a mending heart was merely a fairy tale for the naïve.
Yet, even amid heartache, fragments of hope began to shimmer. She recalled the quiet moments when, despite the pervasive sense of disloyalty and deceit, small acts of kindness—unexpected smiles from strangers, a warm cup of tea shared with a friend who had proved loyal—had begun to piece her heart back together. It was in those subtle gestures that Marianne began to gather the scattered remnants of trust.
Now, as dusk approached and the muted colours of the twilight danced on the wet pavement, she allowed herself a tentative smile. Perhaps, she mused, the cruelty of the world was balanced by its moments of merciful beauty. In that fragile equilibrium, there remained a glimmer of belief that she could one day open herself fully to love again—albeit with wiser, more guarded eyes.
She rose slowly from the bench, stepping over puddles that mirrored the tumult within. Marianne did not know if the world would ever truly show her mercy, but she had started to believe that her mending heart, though scarred and cautious, was capable of enduring further storms. And as she walked away into the gathering night, she silently vowed to rebuild her trust and reclaim the light she had once lost—even if it meant facing the disloyal whispers of cruel people, or the painful echoes of past betrayals.
In that single, rain-washed moment, Marianne embraced the paradox of her reality: a life where love and betrayal intertwined, where a broken heart slowly mended beneath the tender watch of faith, and where sometimes, even without the world's mercy, one could find the strength to believe in oneself again.