WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's appearance through the eyes of someone who harbours intense resentment for them.

How do their emotions change the way they see this character?

That Girl

Her eyes. I hate how piercing they are; it’s like she can see things that aren’t there.


She’s probably crazy; I don’t fully know, but she must be. She says she doesn’t remember anything—what a liar.


I don’t know why they trust her. No one believes me when I say she’s no good. It’s just this feeling… it’s like she’s not meant to be here. It’s like when you come face-to-face with one of /them/… you just know you can’t trust that person.


And I know Luna is just like that.

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