WRITING OBSTACLE

Inspired by Samantha Roberts

Write a descriptive scene about a character feeling the sunlight on their face for the first time in a very long while.

Try to use as many senses as you can to capture this moment.

I Get Kiddnapped Almost Immediately(c11)

As the sunlight hit his pale skin he jumped, momentarily blinded by the new light in the sky. He looked at Kylie, her black hair falling on her shoulders in the most perfect way. “We did it!” she squealed in joy. The light sharpened her features, making her even more beautiful, if possible. _Dad would hate me_, he thought laughing. The heat was almost overwhelming compared to the cold darkness. He caught a smell that he had nearly forgotten, trees. Then he was knocked out cold.

He was tied to a stalagmite in a cave, a woman standing over him. It seemed like he only had the light for a second before it was snatched away again. “Krystal…” he could barely talk, weakness spreading through his body. “You forgot one thing, Will. Don't trust strangers. The woman pulled out a sword identical to Kylies. “No!” he used all his power to shout, out it came out quiet and slow. “Don’t worry boy. The girl isn't real. As for you…” she slammed the sword on him. Right before the hilt hit, a teenage gothic boy appeared. He held the hilt up. “RUN!” the boy kicked him. Will didn't look back. He just ran. And he wondered about all his adventures with Kylie. A tear ran down his cheek. It was always just Krystal. His father _knew_. His father could have warned him. But he didn't. He didn't care about anything but his throne. He ran out of the cave. The sun wasn't there anymore, instead, rain clouds poured furiously. He ran for his father's domain, holding his sword so tight his knuckles turned pure white.

To be continued…


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