STORY STARTER

Write a story that ends with the line, 'Amidst the chaos, I fade away peacefully in your arms.'

Note that this character doesn’t necessarily have to be dying.

Musical Pain

Darkness, I was only living in the beeping of my heart. Breathing, I could now hear my breathing, the darkness was peaceful, despite that I could feel that this was an aftermath of something horrible. My heart and lungs sung a harmonious song to the darkness. The next thing to come into my senses was the pain. My breathing sped up at the sound of the rouge rift of the pain through the harmonious violins. Life began to faze through the darkness, the metronome of beeping joined the band. Lights so bright, and breathing so hard, every breath pain plays its solo through my body. My head throbbing in between the metronome of machine beeping. I opend my eyes, wincing at the drastic change from the darkness. Once my eyes adjusted to the light I started looking around the room, trying to figure out where I was. My mind was blank, only filled with the music of pain, one thing managed to fill my mind.


“-Where-……..my parents…where” I muttered as my drowsiness threatened to stop my words.


Wait. I looked around, I was in a hospital.


My brain cracked, and in flooded recent memories. I winced my eyes sounds-breaks screatching-glass shattering-beautiful things being broken- sliced between my brain. The crash.. The crash? The crash! M-mom D-dad. The sight of lifelessness in their bodies. No… No no they.


A figure, approached the bed.


“Mom. Mom” I called out to her, her face became hazy, it was her. My sight distorted with the delusions of medication. My aunt cried as she just looked at me, lying there, calling out to someone who was gone beyond return. Everyone was sobbing, yet I was oblivious, blinded by delusions. She hugged me, knowing I was still oblivious to the real world.


“It’ll be okay it’ll-“ she sniffled. “It’ll be okay”


Amidst the chaos of the real world, I faded away peacefully in her arms.


(Just did this fast didn’t proof read it so lol but here’s what I got for today’s prompt)

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