STORY STARTER

Submitted by Luke

Write a scene or story where a character loses something.

This doesn't have to be an item; what else could they lose?

Losing My Patience

I lose my patience

When I log on

And see that the writings I worked so hard on

Have no reads

No likes

No comments


It makes me feel

Appalled

That I spent hours

Writing things

And no one

Likes them

Comments 3

Ya, I feel the same way, luckily I just got a comment from someone that wasn't you Jaycie lol!

Don’t be disheartened! The worth of your art is not dependent on the number of likes and comments. You’ve created some beautiful work!


I love your use of enjambement in this poem. It makes words like “appalled” jump from the page. Well done! 👏