STORY STARTER
Submitted by Luke
Write a scene or story where a character loses something.
This doesn't have to be an item; what else could they lose?
Losing My Patience
I lose my patience
When I log on
And see that the writings I worked so hard on
Have no reads
No likes
No comments
It makes me feel
Appalled
That I spent hours
Writing things
And no one
Likes them
Comments 3
Ya, I feel the same way, luckily I just got a comment from someone that wasn't you Jaycie lol!
Don’t be disheartened! The worth of your art is not dependent on the number of likes and comments. You’ve created some beautiful work!
I love your use of enjambement in this poem. It makes words like “appalled” jump from the page. Well done! 👏
