COMPETITION PROMPT

“I trust you,” she says as his knife points to her throat.

Write a story using this prompt.

Betrayal

“I’m sorry” she cries out. Starring in his eyes full of anger, rage, hurt. A moment of silence as Jack looks up and catches a glimpse of himself thru the mirror. For minutes he stood there in silence. The only sounds were of the thunder and rain outside the bathroom window. “Get dressed we going for a ride “ says Jack.With the thoughts of his wife Cindy, and his brother John replaying over and over in his head. Like a movie that would never end. The betrayal, the trust, the life so perfect they shared. All thrown away the moment he walked in his home and saw the two showering. So unaware that Jack had returned home early from his business trip with flowers to surprise his deceitful wife. Standing in a pool of blood where John lies. He placed that knife to Cindy’s neck while she pleaded “Please don’t kill me” she screamed . “I wouldn’t do anything to hurt you” he shouted. “I trust you “ she says….

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