WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a dialogue scene that portrays a toxic relationship.

Dry Ice in a Furnace

The mirror stares back


The nerve, I think to myself


This witless fool won’t do anything without me telling him to


He looks at me with such an unsatisfied gaze


Of one who knows nothing


I stare back and wait for him to make the first move


He never will


You say, “Whatever.”


Did I say that? Or was it you


I’ll never know


The distinction is like dry ice trying to cool a furnace


If I move, you mock me


With a bitterness that could salt the arctic with ash


I am always filled with vehement hatred when I look into your eyes


But you’ll never tell me something I won’t believe


It beggars my ability to understand anything at all


Are you there when I leave?


I’ll never know


You’re always there when I look


But you often never say a word


And you always reek of disappointment


Send word to whoever you serve that I’ve resigned from this enduring conflict


I no longer care what you think


I am the captain now


Walk the plank

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