WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a story that uses a repeated sentence of less than five words.

This refrain could be something that a character says a lot, or a thematic phrase.

She Loves Me…

She loves me.


I buy the ring.


She loves me.


It’s more than I can afford.


She loves me.


I make her favorite dinner.


She loves me.


The door opens and she walks in with a smile on her face.


She loves me.


We eat dinner, her smile still lingering.


She loves me.


I walk her out to the beach, but her smile has faded.


She loves me?


The sun sets and I get down on one knee; she begins to cry.


She loves me.


“Will you marry me?” She is silent.


She loves me?


Tears fall from her pain-stricken face. “I cannot”, she says. “There is another one; I don’t love you anymore.”


She doesn’t love me.


“I intended to break up today,” she admits.


She doesn’t love me.


“Who?” I question with agony and wrath.


She doesn’t love me.


“Jack,” she confesses. Her coworker.


She doesn’t love me.


I throw the ring into the ocean and walk away from her cries and pain.


I do not love her.

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