WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story that uses a repeated sentence of less than five words.
This refrain could be something that a character says a lot, or a thematic phrase.
She Loves Me…
She loves me.
I buy the ring.
She loves me.
It’s more than I can afford.
She loves me.
I make her favorite dinner.
She loves me.
The door opens and she walks in with a smile on her face.
She loves me.
We eat dinner, her smile still lingering.
She loves me.
I walk her out to the beach, but her smile has faded.
She loves me?
The sun sets and I get down on one knee; she begins to cry.
She loves me.
“Will you marry me?” She is silent.
She loves me?
Tears fall from her pain-stricken face. “I cannot”, she says. “There is another one; I don’t love you anymore.”
She doesn’t love me.
“I intended to break up today,” she admits.
She doesn’t love me.
“Who?” I question with agony and wrath.
She doesn’t love me.
“Jack,” she confesses. Her coworker.
She doesn’t love me.
I throw the ring into the ocean and walk away from her cries and pain.
I do not love her.