WRITING OBSTACLE
Create a dialogue scene between an artist and their muse.
In the Details
The studio smelled of turpentine and orange peels, sunlight slanting in through the high windows like liquid gold. Canvases leaned like drunken soldiers against the far wall, all of them incomplete. The only finished piece—an oil painting of a woman with a storm in her eyes and a half-smile playing on her lips—hung above the easel like a quiet deity.
“You’re wasting your time,” the muse said flatly.
She sat cross-legged on the paint-stained chaise, arms folded tightly over her chest, chin tucked low. Her hair was unbrushed, curling in defiance, and a smear of chocolate from a croissant she’d only half-heartedly eaten marred her lip.
The artist didn’t look up from the canvas. The brush in his hand paused mid-stroke.
“Am I?”
She scoffed, eyes flicking away to the window where dust danced in the sunlight like miniature spirits. “I’m not even inspiring. I’m grumpy. I look like a tired library ghost. And my thighs touch. Great muse, huh?”
The artist dipped his brush into burnt umber, the color of wet bark, and continued. “You know what I see?”
“No,” she said bitterly. “But I’m sure it’s some poetic nonsense.”
He smiled softly. “I see how your eyebrows knit together when you’re trying not to cry. Like twin birds bracing against wind.”
Her mouth opened, but no words came.
“I see the way your fingers fidget with the corner of the cushion when you’re pretending not to care. How your left foot always curls under your right when you’re angry but staying.”
He moved to a cooler tone now—lavender smudged with pearl.
“I see the moonlight in your under-eye shadows, like you carry night in your bones. And the way your voice breaks when you say you’re ‘fine,’ as if the truth is pressing its face to the glass behind it.”
“You make it sound beautiful,” she whispered, almost angry.
“I paint what I see,” he said simply. “And beauty, for me, has always lived in the details that don’t scream for attention.”
She looked down at her hands. “But I’m not radiant like your other models. I’m not glowing. I’m… tired.”
He finally set the brush down.
He crossed the room quietly, kneeling before her like a supplicant before an altar. “You are the gold vein running through the cracks. Kintsugi, not perfection. You’re the coffee stain on a love letter, the smudge of mascara under a red-rimmed eye. You are lived-in, and honest, and full of weight.”
Their eyes met.
“You are art because you’ve endured.”
Her throat bobbed. “Then why do I still feel… unwanted?”
He reached up and gently tucked a curl behind her ear, fingers lingering against her cheek.
“Because the world only teaches you to love yourself when you’re lit up. But I see you in shadow. In silence. In stillness. And even then, you take my breath away.”
Her eyes welled, betraying the sharpness in her tone.
“And if I painted only perfection,” he added, voice thick with certainty, “I would’ve never picked up a brush at all.”
She reached for his hand, and for the first time all afternoon, sat still.
Not posing.
Just being.
And that, he thought, was the moment he needed to capture most.