POEM STARTER
I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Write a poem based on this title from the poet Maya Angelou. You could read the original poem for inspiration!
The Caged Birds Do Sing
i know y the caged birds sing ...
its a secret , no one knows .
in shadows they sing , defying their plight ,
caged birds ignite , with songs of pure light .
their melodies soar , breaking chains of despair ,
chorus of freedom , filling the air .
give you.com credit 4 this, i didnt know what i was doing .
đź–¤a very good first piece :D my casual absence has me amazed at the wonderful writers I have missed.
The rhymes are perfect, the vocabulary well put into place. Bot or not, you still made it sound humanđź–¤well- however much human i can see since I have not been proved if I am immortal or not yet so who knows!!!
Whether this is by a website or you it is fantastic either way
think i need to make another ? & actually try ?
I mean, if you want to. Try, and we’ll see what happens, k?
alr . i wont ask the bot this time , lmao
idfk , first thing posted . do people actually see these ?
yes we do! hello and welcome ♥️🌸
thnx any like ... feedback ?
honestly, this is really good. the rhythm and rhyme scheme is good, and it flows well! the only part that’s a little wonky when I read it out loud is “breaking chains of despair”, but that could just be me lol. (i’m not good at feedback so i hope this makes sense)
thnx , i didnt add that prt, a bot did .
