POEM STARTER

Submitted by Alice Clifford

Write a poem describing the beauty of something you believe is overlooked.

Try and create a interesting picture of this beauty in your writing

For Elders As Old As You

The beauty of a person is overlooked,

Mostly because, at first glance,

You see what your mind tells you,

Maybe someone too young,


Maybe someone too old.


Maybe someone who doesn’t look the best,

Maybe someone single and depressed..


Who knows what someone is going through,

Who knows what someone has seen,

Who knows what someone has gone through.


Never judge a book by its cover,

They tell children of three and four,

But four-real? It goes through one ear,

And out the other.


Maybe you should tell yourself that,

Maybe retract that,

Maybe re-say that,

For those words, matter a lot in the long run.


For children.


For adults.


For elders as old as you.

(sorry just a joke😂)


(So sorry about the comments they are messing up for me, I will ask about it)

Comments 20

Which Warriors characters are in your profile picture now?!😅

Actually let me guess, Mothwing and Leafpool?

Haha.

Actually, I’m not 100% sure, but that would be my closest guess. I kinda just….drew something similar to some online picture.

I can draw, but with something in front of me 😅

OMG, you drew that?! It’s beautiful!

Oh umn, thank you!

It’s kinda just a secret talent.

Quick question and I know it isn’t feedback, but does your profile picture happen to be a Warrior cat character?

Yes actually, I didn’t think anyone would notice🤣

Are you able to guess which one is the question?

Sandstorm?

Yep

Yay!!!

I know my cats

Which Warrior cat is your favorite? It’s probably Sandstorm but I’m asking anyway

I’d say Jayfeather….but honestly I can’t choose!!!

Have you read the new Warrior cats books yet?

No, I haven’t,

Had to stop at The Darkest Night because it wasn’t available to me.

But they are really good anyways.