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"I saw the whole thing"...

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Soot & Sorrow

(I literally have no clue what I wrote so bare w me ๐Ÿ˜ญ)


โ€œI saw the whole thing,โ€ she wept in front of me, hands buried in her tangled auburn hair, now streaked with soot. She sobbed and sobbed and sobbedโ€”so much that I thought she could fill a sea with her tears.


โ€œShhhh,โ€ I whispered, an attempt at comfort. Even in distress, she was breathtakingโ€”her bright blue eyes, glossy and drowning in sorrow. โ€œItโ€™s okay. Itโ€™s okay,โ€ I repeated, reaching out to smooth a hand over her hair.


She peeked up at me, those wonderful eyes locking onto mine, her cheeks flushed red beneath the freckles splattered across her face. โ€œItโ€™s not okay,โ€ she murmured, shaking her head. โ€œIt will never be okay. Not today. Not tomorrow.โ€


โ€œYes, it will,โ€ I corrected her, softly but firmly. I needed her to believe that. I needed something to cling toโ€”something that wasnโ€™t just death and despair. โ€œYouโ€™ll see.โ€ A sad smile ghosted my lips. โ€œIโ€™ll show you.โ€


โ€œHow?โ€ she choked out. โ€œI watched them die, Samuel.โ€ Her breath hitched, her body trembling. โ€œThere is no coming back from that. No more happiness. No more anythingโ€”just death.โ€


I understood. They were her parents, fallen before her in a battle we had created. No amount of sympathy could lessen her grief.


I took a slow, steadying breath and crouched beside her. Her hands still pressed to her cheeks, small gasps escaping her lips. โ€œWeโ€™ll figure it out,โ€ I said, though the words felt hollow.


Because what was I supposed to say? What was I supposed to do? I couldnโ€™t bring her parents back. Or her sisters. Or anyone my soldiers had slaughtered.


This was my fault. There was no figuring it out.


Finallyโ€”finallyโ€”she looked at me with some small, fragile fragment of hope. โ€œYou promise?โ€


I shivered. The lie formed on my lips before I could stop it.


โ€œI promise.โ€


I couldnโ€™t bring her family back to life, but I would do everything in my power to make it right again.


For her.


For us.


For this kingdomโ€™s future.

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