STORY STARTER

Submitted by CJ

The year is 2050, and all children are bought up in a government institution.

Create a story that takes place in this setting.

The Raines of Tomorrow

Title: The Rains of Tomorrow


Year: 2050


In the towering city of Novum, the skyline pierced the horizon like jagged teeth, silhouetted against a stainless-steel sun that rarely threaded through the ever-present smog. Here, children were not raised in homes but within the sterile walls of the Neovita Institution, a sprawling complex designed to cultivate the “ideal” citizens of tomorrow.


In the gray hallways, robotic instructors moved with mechanical precision, guiding groups of children through lessons on obedience, productivity, and loyalty to the Citizens’ Charter. Each child, dressed in identical gray uniforms, wore a tracking band on their wrists that monitored their every move, ensuring compliance. Emotions were to be suppressed, individuality discouraged—it was a world built on conformity.


Among these children was Ava, a ten-year-old girl with bright green eyes that seemed to hold an ember of rebellion against the grayness around her. She often felt different from her peers, drawn to the wild hues of life that were absent in Neovita. There was a spark in her heart, born from whispered memories of a past she had only glimpsed through indoctrinated dreams—of trees swaying in the wind, the taste of rain on her tongue, and the shimmering stars that dotted the night sky.


One afternoon, during regulated recess time in the Institution’s artificial gardens, Ava lingered at the edge of the stream that meandered through the garden, its water a deep shade of synthetic blue designed to simulate rivers of the outside world. She knelt down, mesmerized, as she watched a small paper boat—a relic from the old days—drift with the current.


Suddenly, she spotted another child, Liam, who was often bullied for his shy nature, approaching. He stopped a few feet away, his brow furrowed in curiosity.


“What are you doing?” he asked softly, looking over her shoulder.


“I’m watching my boat,” she replied, a smile breaking through her serious demeanor. “It’s supposed to take me places.”


“Places?” he echoed, puzzled. “We don’t go anywhere. We stay here and learn to be good citizens.”


Ava turned to him, her voice barely above a whisper. “But what if there are more than just this? What if we could find those places?”


Liam frowned, his face twisted in confusion. “You shouldn’t say things like that. They said—”


“I don’t care what they said!” Ava interrupted, suddenly fierce. “I want to see the real sky, not the holograms. I want to taste real rain, not just this fake water.”


For a moment, the weight of her words hung in the air between them. The stream gurgled softly, and the distant sounds of the Institution’s machinery faded into a muted hum.


“Do you really think it’s possible?” Liam asked, his voice trembling with a mix of hope and fear.


“I don’t know,” Ava admitted, her green eyes glinting with determination. “But if we work together, maybe we can find a way out.”


Days turned into weeks as Ava and Liam stealthily sought to discover the secrets of Neovita. They gathered scraps of information from fellow children who had dreamt of a world beyond their walls. At night, when the automated lights dimmed, they’d whisper in shadows, swapping dreams of what lay outside.


One evening, as the two sat on the metal roof of their dormitory, staring at the blurry shapes of stars blinking through the city’s haze, Ava shared her idea.


“Tomorrow, during the Regulated Exploration Directive, I found a breach in the fence at the western perimeter. We can slip out during the debriefing! It’s our chance.”


Liam’s heart raced; hope and fear intertwined. “What if we get caught?”


“They won’t be looking for us as long as we’re smart about it. I need to know if there’s something more out there. Don’t you want to know too?”


“I… I guess so,” he breathed, uncertainty still clouding his voice.


Early the next morning, during the allotted time for exploration within the Institution’s confines, Ava and Liam stealthily made their way toward the western perimeter.


When they reached the fence, Ava's heart raced with anticipation. She found the hole just as she remembered, its edges torn and jagged. She squeezed through, followed closely by Liam, who hesitated before plunging into the unknown.


EXT. OUTSIDE NEOVITA INSTITUTION - DAY


The moment they emerged into the world beyond the walls, the cacophony of the city faded into the background, replaced by a serene silence broken only by the rustling of leaves and distant birdsong. Before them stretched an unkempt field of tall grass, wildflowers, and a dazzling blue sky that felt almost surreal.


Ava inhaled deeply, the air rich with unfamiliar scents—earth, flowers, and freedom. She was mesmerized. “We found it… we actually found it.”


Liam stared at the expanse ahead, a mix of wonder and trepidation filling his thoughts. He walked cautiously beside Ava, who moved boldly ahead, her feet dancing through the grass, laughter escaping her lips.


“This is just the beginning!” she declared, a shadow of uncertainty swept away by her exhilaration.


Together, they ventured deeper into the world beyond Novum, the Institution fading behind them like a dark dream.


They didn’t know what lay ahead—challenges, adventures, perhaps danger—but they knew they had each other. For the first time, they felt the intoxicating taste of hope and the exhilarating thrill of true freedom.


And in this new world, they were more than just children raised by a government institution. They were explorers, seekers of truth, and firmly planted seeds of rebellion in a realm ripe for change.


As they disappeared into the horizon, the sun broke through the clouds, casting rays of light upon what had once been a forsaken dream.


FADE OUT.

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