WRITING OBSTACLE
In a short scene, how can your protagonist say “I won’t forget you” without literally saying the words “I won’t forget you”?
I Still
Your sweet voice whispers through my ears,
to the tunnels of my mind each night
like they did that very flighty night
when you made me put up a fight
and you asked me to let go of my love like a kite
But i wouldn't let go
and so i unleashed like a famished dog,
with a nasty bite.
I still feel the heat of your wild breaths
Each one as warm as it was
when your once sun kissed flesh collided against mine.
I still feel the heat of your wild breaths.
Only now, I'm choking you to death.
your sweet voice wails through my ears,
to the tunnels of my mind each night
like they did that very flighty night.
when you made me put up a fight.
your body forever lay bruised,
bruised by love or hate or blame.
no movement in the room but the grooms
I may have led you to doom.
I suppose you dug up your own tomb
when you touched that nasty pawn
and now a sperm lays in your womb.
What more could you want? I mean i paid the bills.
You may lay still
but at least now i can keep you in a room.