WRITING OBSTACLE

In a short scene, how can your protagonist say “I won’t forget you” without literally saying the words “I won’t forget you”?

I Still

Your sweet voice whispers through my ears,

to the tunnels of my mind each night

like they did that very flighty night

when you made me put up a fight

and you asked me to let go of my love like a kite

But i wouldn't let go

and so i unleashed like a famished dog,

with a nasty bite.


I still feel the heat of your wild breaths

Each one as warm as it was

when your once sun kissed flesh collided against mine.


I still feel the heat of your wild breaths.

Only now, I'm choking you to death.

your sweet voice wails through my ears,

to the tunnels of my mind each night

like they did that very flighty night.

when you made me put up a fight.


your body forever lay bruised,

bruised by love or hate or blame.

no movement in the room but the grooms

I may have led you to doom.

I suppose you dug up your own tomb

when you touched that nasty pawn

and now a sperm lays in your womb.

What more could you want? I mean i paid the bills.

You may lay still

but at least now i can keep you in a room.











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