WRITING OBSTACLE
Submitted by Lizzie Rose.
Write a poem or story about fog, steering away from any horror themes.
Usually when we think of fog, our minds come up with a daunting image. Try to make your story/poem beautiful.
A Veil of Silver
In the quiet blush of predawn, when the world still slumbers beneath a gentle hush, a veil of silvery mist descends upon the waking land. It drapes over hedgerows and cottages alike, as if nature herself has unfurled a soft, translucent banner to celebrate the arrival of a new day.
I stepped out into this delicate world, a wanderer amidst wonder. Each footstep on the dew-kissed path left an imprint on the soft earth, and every breath I drew was imbued with the cool, fresh scent of moist heather and ancient pines. The fog was not a spectre of fear, but a tender companion, blurring the edges of tired reality and transforming the familiar into something enchantingly unknown.
Trees emerged as gentle silhouettes, their branches reaching out like the graceful strokes of an artist’s brush. Far above, the first rays of the sun teased the horizon, igniting the mist in a quiet celebration of light and hope. The world, momentarily freed from its harsh outlines, unfolded as a dreamscape where every sound—a distant lark’s song, the soft murmur of a brook unseen—spoke of subtle joys and whispered secrets.
I wandered further, letting the fog guide my steps. In this ethereal embrace, time seemed to slow, each second stretching into an eternity of calm reflection. The mist cradled every detail in a delicate softness, reminding me that beauty often resides in life’s gentlest moments. There was no place for dread here; only the promise of discovery in every shadow and every luminous glimmer hidden within the haze.
As noon approached and the sun ascended higher, the fog began its slow retreat, leaving behind a world washed anew—a tapestry of glistening grass, delicate wildflowers, and a serene quietude that lingered like a sweet memory. I returned home, heart light and spirit lifted by the enchantment of a morning spent in nature’s quiet reverie.
In that fleeting, magical ballet of fog and light, I found a gentle reminder that sometimes, beauty lies in the soft, ephemeral moments that colour the edges of our everyday lives.