STORY STARTER
Submitted by Ellipsis
'…and all they could do was cry.'
Write a short story that ends with this as the final line.
The Shadows at Bramblegate
I. The Arrival
The first thing Amelia noticed when she stepped off the bus was how the wind seemed to whisper. Not whistle—whisper. As if the bare oaks lining the gravel lane had tiny mouths hidden under their bark, trading secrets she was never meant to hear.
She shivered and pulled her mother’s old green scarf tighter around her neck. It still smelled like lilacs and mothballs, like memories that hadn’t quite finished dying.
Up ahead, the rusted sign for Bramblegate swung back and forth on its hinges: BRAMBLEGATE — EST. 1734. It creaked in a way that sounded more like a groan than a welcome.
She’d come to this tiny village because her life in the city was a smoldering ruin—wrecked by a cheating fiancé, drained by a dead-end job, capped by her mother’s funeral that had left her hollow. Her mother’s last words had been a fragile plea: “Find somewhere quiet, somewhere you can mend.”
So here she was. Standing on cracked asphalt with her suitcases stacked like little tombstones at her feet. Wondering if peace could really live in places this lonely—or if she’d simply traded one set of ghosts for another.
II. The House on Hollow Lane
Mrs. Whitcomb met her at the house she’d rented. A round woman with a swirl of curls pinned precariously on her head, wrapped in a shawl that smelled faintly of woodsmoke.
“It’s a good house,” Mrs. Whitcomb said with forced cheer, smoothing her shawl as if to anchor herself. “Bit drafty in winter, but the hearth keeps it snug enough.”
Amelia tried to smile, her eyes sweeping over the cottage. Ivy strangled the walls, windows sweated with condensation, and the door sagged as though weary of being knocked.
Inside wasn’t much better. Dust layered everything, cobwebs stitched across beams. The air tasted of old damp wood, and the floors dipped underfoot like something soft beneath the boards.
But it was hers. For now.
Mrs. Whitcomb fussed over where to leave spare linens and how to jiggle the latch on the back door, then left with a promise to return with bread. Amelia closed the door behind her and leaned against it. The house settled around her with tiny sighs and cracks, like it was slowly remembering how to breathe.
She unpacked carefully. Her mother’s music box went on the mantle. Journals stacked by the writing desk under the window. A photograph of her and Sarah laughing on a summer beach—back when futures still felt wide open.
III. The Whispering
It began the second night.
She was half asleep when she heard it—a hush of voices threading through the dark. At first she thought it was the wind, but then the words sharpened.
—stay—
—leave—
—join us—
Her heart slammed into her ribs. She sat up, scanning the dim room. Moonlight cut pale lines across the floor. Nothing moved, nothing there.
“Old houses creak,” she muttered to herself, voice hoarse. “That’s all.”
But the next night it came again, closer. Sometimes she thought she heard laughter twined through it—high and brittle.
She started sleeping with a lamp on. It didn’t help. The light only deepened the shadows in the corners, which seemed to breathe on their own. Once, blinking awake, she was sure she saw dark shapes on the ceiling, curling like fingers. When she blinked again, they were gone.
IV. The Boy in the Garden
A week into her stay, needing air, Amelia wandered into the overgrown garden behind the cottage. Brambles caught at her jeans. A rusted bench slumped under ivy.
That’s when she saw him.
A boy. Seven, maybe eight. Standing by an old oak, watching her with wide, unblinking eyes. He wore a little gray vest and knickers that looked like they belonged to another century.
“Hello?” she called gently.
He didn’t answer. Just tilted his head, lifted a finger to his lips in a silent shh, then stepped behind the tree.
Amelia ran after him, heart hammering. But there was nothing there. Only twisted roots and a strange cold that lapped at her skin.
That night she dreamed of him. Standing at the foot of her bed, tears sliding down his cheeks. His mouth was stitched shut with fine black thread, and though he tried to speak, he could only sob soundlessly.
V. The Journal
The next morning, desperate for distraction, she cleaned. Wiped every surface, threw open windows that groaned in protest. In a hallway cabinet, behind stacks of brittle newspapers, she found an old leather-bound book.
She carried it to the writing desk, breath tight. It was a journal. The handwriting thin and shaky. Dates ran from 1921 to 1923.
March 3, 1922
The voices keep me from sleep. They come from the cellar now. I nailed boards across the door but still they whisper. Mother says it’s only the wind—I wish I believed her.
June 15, 1922
Saw Thomas in the orchard today. Smiling that hollow smile. But Thomas has been dead two years. Why does he come?
October 31, 1922
They took Emily. Right from her bed. Only her doll left, eyes scratched out. God help us.
The last entry was a frantic scrawl across the page, ink blotched with tears.
THEY LIVE IN THE DARK. THEY FEED ON WHAT WE LOVE. IF THEY CALL YOUR NAME, DO NOT ANSWER. DO NOT.
Amelia slammed the book shut, pulse racing. Her gaze darted to the nearest corner, half-expecting something to be waiting.
VI. The Cellar
Days blurred. The voices grew bold, calling her name.
—Amelia—
—come see—
—downstairs, Amelia—
She fought it. For days she refused to even glance at the cellar door. But curiosity gnawed at her. By the twelfth night, she found herself standing at the top of the steps, a candle trembling in her hand. The door, once firmly shut, now hung open like a mouth waiting to swallow her.
She descended slowly. Each step moaned under her weight. The candle’s small glow revealed walls slick with damp, shelves bowing under old jars.
Then she saw it: a circle of tiny bones laid carefully on the dirt floor. Children’s bones. At the center sat a cracked porcelain doll, its eyes gouged into dark pits.
The voices pressed close, curling around her like cold breath.
—We kept them company—
—So lonely, Amelia—
—Stay with us too—
Her candle sputtered, then died. Darkness closed over her like water.
VII. The Bargain
She fled. Up the stairs, down the hall, into her bedroom where she locked the door and pressed her back against it, gasping.
Then came soft crying. From under the bed.
“Who’s there?” she choked.
The boy crawled out, tears streaking his dirty face. He clawed at the black stitches sealing his lips, shaking.
“Oh God… who did this to you?”
He only sobbed harder, then pointed toward the far corner.
Shadows there writhed, pulling themselves up into something tall and thin, skin like rotted bark. Its face was a mass of moving darkness, dozens of eyes blinking open.
—We keep them safe, Amelia— the voices chorused. —You will join them. Or we will go elsewhere. To someone far. Someone who holds laughter. A tiny heartbeat—
In her mind, she saw Sarah. Rocking her baby in a sunlit room. Unaware.
—Choose. Stay, or we visit them instead.
Her mouth worked soundlessly. Tears spilled down her cheeks.
—Decide—
A strangled nod was all she managed. Anything to keep Sarah safe.
VIII. The Last Morning
When Mrs. Whitcomb arrived the next morning with bread, she found the house cold and silent. She called for Amelia. No answer.
Upstairs, the bed was neatly made, as if no one had ever slept there at all. Only the music box remained, still open on the dresser, its tune delicate and haunting.
IX. The Reunion
Weeks later, Sarah packed up Amelia’s things. Her husband stayed outside with the baby, too unsettled by the house’s gloom.
Sarah folded clothes, boxed up books, avoiding the corners that seemed too dark. On the dresser she found a letter addressed to her.
Dearest Sarah,
If you ever hear the whispers, promise me you’ll run. Don’t let them make you choose. I did what I had to. Hold your little one close. I love you more than my own life.
—Amelia
Tears smudged the ink, blurring the words into tiny rivers.
X. The Ending
Outside, Sarah clutched her baby tight. Her husband wrapped an arm around her, guiding her to the car. The house receded behind them, its windows blank and watchful.
Upstairs, two figures stood at the glass. The boy with stitched lips. Amelia, her eyes empty, her smile aching.
Inside, the whispering started again. Hungry for new names.
And all they could do was cry.