WRITING OBSTACLE

Inspired by Amber A

Use the metaphor of a fuse being lit and its impending explosion to represent a mental eruption of a strong emotion.

Consider how you will develop this metaphor with strong visual and emotional representation.

My Escape

⚠️TW: SELF HARM ⚠️


I stood up

Walked across my room


Everything a little hazy

A mental photo of a lighter

The flame small and steady


Each step i took down the steps

The flame got bigger

Bigger and bigger


I stood in the kitchen

The flame big enough to destory a kingdom


My heart beating

The knife in my hands

With no recollection of picking it up


My vision blurring with my tears

My heart pounding so hard

Nearly falling out of my chest


The pain sharp and nice

Blood flowing down my arm

Down my chest


The flame destroying my kingdom

Leaving me to fall


Waking up in a hospital bed

The flame still burning


The sweet sweet pain

Gone

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