WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Frankie Famighetti

Create an origin story for a common saying, such as 'break the ice' or 'once in a blue moon'.

Your story should explain how this expression came to be, and why it means what it does.

Break The Ice

Chapter #1: The Breaking of Icewind Fjord: The Origin of a Common Saying


Long before maps named the lands and cities drew borders with ink and pride, there was a northern realm known only as Icewind. Nestled between jagged mountain ridges and dense pine forests, Icewind's villages clung to the edges of its vast frozen fjords like frost on glass. Its people were hardy, carved from the same granite that lined their shores, and shaped by the relentless cold that ruled their lives for more than half the year.


Icewind's most vital connection to the world — and to each other — was water. In the brief but bountiful summer months, longboats crisscrossed the fjords, bringing fish, pelts, herbs, and stories from one village to another. Trade flourished on the waves, and with it came joy, celebration, and unity.


But when winter came, it came as a conqueror.


The fjords froze solid, their surfaces hard as stone and silent as the grave. No boats could travel. Villages became isolated, sometimes for months. Supplies dwindled. Illnesses spread. Feuds festered without a neutral party to mediate. Lovers separated by mere miles became strangers. It was as though the land itself had folded in on itself and forgotten how to breathe.


That might have been the fate of Icewind—frozen hearts as well as frozen shores—were it not for a tradition born of necessity and bravery.


Each year, as the first signs of spring trembled in the air and sunlight lingered a few moments longer on the horizon, the elders of the villages gathered in the coastal town of Brekka, the heart of Icewind. There, they appointed a crew of the strongest sailors, the cleverest engineers, and the boldest spirits. These brave souls would board a vessel known across the realm as The Bear’s Maw.


Unlike the trade ships built for speed or elegance, The Bear’s Maw was squat and broad, reinforced with metal along its hull. Its prow curved upward like a predator’s snout, meant not to glide through water but to smash through ice. The ship had no grace. But it had purpose.


Its mission: to “break the ice.”


The first crack in the fjord was not just symbolic — it was essential. Once the ice was broken, the fjord’s frozen skin could begin to thaw more rapidly. Other ships could follow the path carved by *The Bear’s Maw*, delivering much-needed goods and reconnecting communities. A clear passage meant renewal. It meant hope.


The tradition was rooted in a time nearly lost to legend. It was said that, in the first year of famine and frost, a girl named Kaelen from the village of Alenfjord had watched her brother die from illness. Their stores were empty, and no help came from neighboring towns, though she knew they would have helped — if only they could reach one another.


Grief-stricken and furious, Kaelen built a raft from old barrels and scrap wood. She fitted it with an iron wedge meant for splitting logs. When her family tried to stop her, she said only, “If no one breaks the ice, we’ll all die alone.”


She left at dawn, paddling into the bitter wind. Villagers watched from the cliffside, stunned. For three days, nothing moved on the fjord but clouds. Then, on the fourth morning, they heard it—a sound like thunder splitting the sky.


The ice had cracked.


Kaelen returned with blue lips and frostbitten fingers, but she came with healers from the next village, and a boat full of food behind them. Her courage became a beacon. The next year more joined her. Soon, a dedicated crew was chosen every spring, and The Bear’s Maw was born.


In time, the phrase “to break the ice” became more than a sailor’s term. It evolved into a metaphor, one that extended far beyond the icy fjords. When two villages had been in dispute, the peacemaker was said to have “broken the ice” between them. When two awkward youths sat beside each other at a midsummer festival, and one dared to ask for a dance, the friends nearby would whisper, “Well, she broke the ice.”


Even among elders, it was said that “a warm heart breaks the hardest ice.”


The expression traveled, carried on the ships that now easily passed through the fjords in early spring. Merchants adopted it, as did diplomats, and minstrels spread it in song. Over centuries, people forgot the original meaning, but not the sentiment.


They forgot the real ice.


They forgot Kaelen’s cracked lips and bloodied hands.


They forgot The Bear’s Maw, stored in Brekka’s boathouse, its iron prow rusted with age and pride.


But the heart of the phrase endured.


Today, when we say “break the ice,” we think of it as a way to ease tension — to be the first to speak, to bridge the gap between strangers, to melt discomfort with courage. But at its core, it is a phrase born from survival. From bravery. From a girl who would not let her people starve in silence.


The next time you find yourself in a room full of people, waiting for someone to speak first, remember this: You’re not just starting a conversation. You’re cracking the surface of isolation. You’re carving a path to connection. You’re doing what Kaelen once did on a frozen fjord: you're breaking the ice.


And that is no small thing.



Chapter #2: The Forgotten Passage

A mystery rooted in frost and folklore


It began with a map.


Dusty, brittle-edged, and buried deep in the archives beneath Brekka’s crumbling Hall of Records. No one had ventured into that lower vault for decades — not since the last archivist, Old Lerrik, was found frozen stiff at his desk during a sudden storm. They said his candle had gone out and he'd been too stubborn to leave until the books were properly catalogued. Others whispered of frost crawling up the walls and voices echoing from stone — stories meant to keep children out and the past sealed away.


But nineteen-year-old Elen Kaelstrom wasn’t like other Brekkans.


She wasn’t content with stories told by firelight or the ghost tours sold to tourists. She wanted the truth — about her family, about the village, and about the one name etched on the town’s memorial stone that had no known grave:


Kaelen.


No surname. No date of death. Just that single name and a rusted carving of an old ship below it. Whenever Elen asked, the adults grew quiet. Her father said she’d “gone missing” during the First Icebreaking — but that couldn’t be true. Every version of the tale made her out to be a hero.


So why no burial? Why no statue?


And then Elen found the map.


She’d crept into the old Hall after hours, when the moonlight cast long shadows and even the wind dared not whistle. Beneath layers of scrolls tied in red twine, she found it: a square of treated vellum wrapped in oilskin, stamped with the sigil of Brekka. But what chilled her wasn’t the icy draft that danced along the floorboards.


It was what the map showed.


A hidden passage — marked in ink as dark as dried blood — running beneath the fjord. Not across. *Beneath.*


At the top, in spidery script:

“The Icebreaker’s Tomb.”


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The next morning, she went to the docks. No one used The Bear’s Maw* anymore — it had been dragged inland and turned into a tourist site, with wooden mannequins and piped-in seagull calls. But the harbor workers still remembered her great-grandfather, Eirik Kaelstrom, the last man to captain an icebreaking expedition before the practice was retired in favor of motorized cutters.


“Crazy old boat,” one of them said, half-laughing. “They say it only listens to Kael blood.”


She smiled politely, but her skin prickled.


That night, map in hand and resolve tightening in her chest like a coiled rope, Elen took a small skiff and rowed to the center of the fjord. The water was smooth as obsidian, but the cold had crept back early this year, frosting the edges. Fog clung to the surface, thick and whispering.


The map said the tomb would only reveal itself under moonlight at the turning tide.


She waited.


And then the water shivered.


A groaning sound — like a door forced open after centuries — rumbled beneath her.


A ring of bubbles broke the surface ahead. Then a massive shape began to rise from the water: stone, carved in the shape of a prow, encrusted with barnacles and ancient runes glowing faintly blue. Her skiff rocked violently as the tide turned. The old passage had been real — sealed beneath the water for generations.


Elen lit her lantern and stepped onto the stone platform. The runes pulsed once under her feet, then dimmed.


She was not the first to find it.


Inside the passage, icy air clawed at her lungs. The tunnel sloped downward, the walls narrowing, until she came to a great iron door flanked by two frost-covered statues of warriors. One held a hammer, the other a helm.


Between them, etched in ancient runes:


“To break the ice is to awaken what lies beneath.”


She hesitated — then pushed.


The door opened with a grinding shriek.


Inside was not a tomb.


It was a vault.


Dozens of books, frozen tools, relics… and in the center, entombed in a thick crystal of ice, was her.


Kaelen.


Not a crumbling skeleton, but perfectly preserved, eyes closed, hands crossed over her chest. As if she had only just fallen asleep. The runes etched into the ice around her glowed faintly.


On a pedestal nearby sat a journal. Elen cracked it open, fingers trembling.


>They would not listen. They would not see. There is something beneath the fjord — something old, something bound. I broke the ice to connect our people… but in doing so, I may have shattered the seals that held it at bay. If you find this, beware. The passage is not just a path of water. It is a mouth. And it hungers still.


A shadow shifted behind her.


Elen turned.


The statues were moving.



Chapter# 2: The Awakening


The statues moved with the sound of cracking stone and low, grinding growls. They weren’t just ancient sentinels—they were guardians*, bound to protect what lay inside the Icebreaker’s Vault.


Elen backed away, her lantern trembling in her hand. The flame flickered violently as the air grew impossibly cold, each breath crystalizing on her lips.


One statue stepped forward, its eyes glowing the same faint blue as the runes. It raised its stone hammer.


“Blood has returned."


The voice didn’t come from its mouth. It echoed in her bones.


She turned to run, heart pounding, but the iron door behind her had sealed shut. Trapped.


She held up the journal. “I’m her descendant—Kaelen’s! I didn’t come to disturb—just to understand!”


The hammer paused mid-air.


The second statue stepped forward, lowering its stone helm slightly as if studying her.


“Then choose. Open the tomb… or seal it forever.”


A pulse of energy rippled through the vault. Kaelen’s icy sarcophagus cracked slightly, a fissure spidering across its surface.


Elen’s fingers trembled as she opened the journal again. The next entry was short:


> "My bloodline will be the key. But it must be a choice. To break the ice… or let it harden forever.”


She stared at Kaelen. Her ancestor hadn’t died. She’d sealed herself alive. Why?


And then she noticed something beyond the sarcophagus—etched into the frozen wall behind it.


A door. Sealed in ice. Its frame was covered in warning runes, pulsing faintly like a heartbeat.


Whatever was behind that door… Kaelen hadn’t just been preserving herself.


She had been guarding it.


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Chapter #3: The Forgotten Crew


Elen escaped.


Barely.


The statues did not stop her as she fled—only watched in silence as she scrambled back through the stone tunnel and rowed herself, soaked and shivering, back to shore.


But the world above wasn’t the same.


The fog was thicker now. The water beneath her boat whispered with movement.


She had awakened something.


Back in Brekka, she poured through local records—anything she could find about Kaelen’s final voyage. Most documents mentioned her heroic journey… but none recorded her return.


Then she found something hidden in the back of a shipwright's logbook.


A second ship.


One that had followed The Bear’s Maw across the fjord, manned by a secret crew called *The Watchers Below*. Their names weren’t listed, only marked with initials. But a final note chilled her.


> Only one returned. Eyes like cracked ice. He said the ice wasn’t natural. He said it listened.


She traced the initials of the surviving Watcher: E.K.


Eirik Kaelstrom. Her great-grandfather.


The last known captain of an icebreaking mission.


The man who never spoke of what he saw again.


And the man who went *missing* on his final winter voyage.


Until now, she had thought he died at sea.


But what if he hadn’t?


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Chapter#4: Beneath the Seal


The second time Elen entered the vault, she wasn’t alone.


She’d found an ally in Torin Vale, a local historian and former diver who had long been obsessed with the myths of Icewind. Most thought him eccentric, but he’d seen the runes before—on a submerged archway hidden beneath the fjord during a dive gone wrong.


“Something ancient lies under Brekka,” he told her as they crossed the fjord by night. “The original settlers knew it. That’s why they built their homes high on the cliffs.”


He carried a satchel of tools: runestone etchings, a lantern powered by arc-light, and a ceremonial dagger passed down from his grandmother—an old priestess of the Frost Temple.


When they returned to the Icebreaker’s Vault, Kaelen's ice was nearly transparent.


She looked almost awake.


Elen placed her palm against the frozen shell. It was warm.


Torin circled the sealed door at the back of the vault, brushing frost from its symbols. “These aren’t just warnings,” he muttered. “They’re bindings."


He looked up, his face pale. “There’s something on the other side of this door. And I think Kaelen sealed herself here to hold it back.”


Elen felt the pressure in the room shift.


Kaelen’s eyes opened.


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Chapter#5: The Whisper Below


Kaelen did not move.


But her lips parted.


And *air*—ice-cold and whispering—escaped her mouth. Not words. Sounds. Murmurs. Like voices echoing across a frozen lake at night.


The temperature in the chamber plummeted.


Torin’s lantern flared blue and then *exploded*.


The chamber plunged into darkness.


Then a low sound rolled beneath them. Not from Kaelen… but from beyond the sealed door


A heartbeat.


Deep, slow, ancient.


Kaelen’s whispers grew clearer. Elen leaned in.


> “The ice was never ours to break.”


> “It was a prison. Not a path.”


> “And now… it remembers.”


With a sudden crack, a section of the frozen wall split wide, revealing more of the door’s strange carvings—serpentine shapes, too vast to be earthly. Torin stumbled back. “These aren’t runes. They’re warnings in a forgotten tongue.”


Elen stared at her ancestor. “What’s behind the door?”


Kaelen's eyes locked on hers.


And she whispered one word.


> “Nythra.”


Torin inhaled sharply. “That’s not a name.”


“What is it, then?” Elen asked.


But Torin was already backing toward the exit, white with fear. “It’s a thing. A frost wraith… older than the first settlers. The Watchers believed it was sealed when the fjord was formed. That if it ever woke, it would bring the second Silence.”


Elen turned back to Kaelen, whose breath still whispered through the vault like falling snow.


And in that moment, Elen knew the truth.


Kaelen hadn’t been Brekka’s first hero.


She’d been its last warning.

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