WRITING OBSTACLE
Tell the reader everything they need to know about a fantasy character by describing in detail their weapon of choice.
Whiplash
Taken from the sex dungeon from BDSM maniac billionaire who’s jaw surgery left him looking comically sharp, Magdalina Smith smith chose the weapon nearest to her when she awoke.
Blessed with being very flexible were her arms, she maneuvered it enough to break free the from the ropes and started using the whip against Noah who merely smiled as if all his wildest dreams were coming true.
Except his wildest dreams didn’t involved him actually being near death.
The whip wrapped around his throat and he turned purple. He fell unconscious and Magdalina didn’t even have time to think as the piece of shit invited other billionaires who brought their own innocent playthings.
Her anger must have been the power that enabled her whip to wrap around multiple men and swing them at walls. No other explanation at all.
Definitely not the fact she was half fairy whose wings were pulled off forcibly when she was a child. Nope.
Her back ached for appendages that were no longer there.
As she beat down all the men and their guards with a single whip, Magdalena became a hero to women kidnapped by powerful men.
Her whip was black and long made out of genuine leather. Each strike was made with no hesitation and afterwards if she had time she would take care of it using a leather care book she thrifted. Apparently you needed to oil them and you cant get them wet.
Nothing about the books said you cant get them wet with blood so she thought the whip was alright.
The whip was a great learning curve though as it made the loudest sound when she tried to make big strikes causing her other enemies to be notified of her.
It wasn’t really usable in hand to hand combat or if there wasn’t any space so she used it to strangle enemies or ties them together as she stabbed them with a dagger.
When she freed the latest batch of vulnerable people from being trafficked, she was met with a child. The child bare her back to her revealing clipped wings. 1/2 of each was taken and Magdalena knew the child must’ve felt like walking on nails for weeks after her wings were irreparable damaged.
Her grip on the whip tightened.
It was time to fight her kind and anyone who dared to hurt a child.
