WRITING OBSTACLE
Choose an important event in your story. Write it in first person, then again in third person.
Even if you have already chosen a narrative voice for your book, this may help you to understand what you need to highlight and which voice lets you achieve this.
The Crew
Who runs a business that’s this messy? Richard asked himself scanning the front of the building as he walked inside. He could see the crew he had called was already here waiting for him. None of these people look like they could handle a long voyage, I hope I did not make a mistake in choosing them. Richard thought to himself self
“Hello I’m glad you could all make it on such short notice”
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